I love the way you appeal to the senses in this one. the imagery is perfect and: "screaming aloud..
if only anyone could hear.."
is so powerful

Welcome to the poetic side of the world.
Great poem, i liked your selection of words and pattern of writing.

all the best and take care

I love this one. u are realli talented in
taking words and making them ur own.
if that makes sense.
xx