Comments : I disappear

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "glory comes to those who deserve it,
    but am I one of these people who do?"
    =>Good...marvellous.. Questioning...criticizing..

    "make me turn inside/out and,
    twist me till I spill out a poem,
    maybe you'll find a meaning hidden,
    but I can't see why I should count.

    I disappear."
    => I love this ending... "I disappear".

    I like this poem, this is inspiring.. :)