Wow,

thats sorta scary, but very good i must say:)

Its kinda scary but really good lol

Omg.. eww. wow?

that is really messed up man.
you did a great job writing this, but its messed up
the flow was good.. but the word rhymine was a bit off at times..
keep up the good work

Agian really good a bit dark and scary but i like that i loved the way you let it flow

Once again this got me thinking:) i still wanna be like u but not when i grow up. i wanna be as good as u right now!

I find it interesting when u say "he sliced through your hips"
Why do u say its a man? or why do u personify it as a man?

Once again
5outa5

**bri