Good poem Nathan! I like how it all fit together. It wasnt all smooth and flowing, but it wasnt choppy and annoying!
I like the overall feel of it. It felt real. It wasnt a sappy poem, but it wasnt totally emotionless. Excellent!

-Morgan-

Thats cool....your poem makes alot of sense ....its always good to never let a bad day work up a whole life time of situations...good job!

Luv it its fknn rad i get it
keep on writing ps

Short...Try adding some different words to it..But its still a really nice poem