Oooo I really like this and you made it rhyme better than i can haha
Good Job!!!!!!!!

Kewlo!!.. I like this actually.. Its nice nd mysterious.. nd nice.. lol.. love it ^-^.. keep continuing writting great poems!!..

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I like how you rhymed it and its one creative poem absolutely unique loved it hun....
Amazing Job!!!
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Wow this poem is really good.=)