Keith,

I thought this one was better than the first. Nicely worded.
5/5

I would over to teach you some of my moves LOL but I am not so good myself.A funny poem and well written.

Hahahhahahah......Wow this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny... ! Um, and true....Yes dear, a lot of people can't dance and I am one of them... :)

Lmfao.
very funny. i dont know what one i like most out of the 2 poems!

just do what i do and make it up. if i can teach myself how to body pop then any one can lol

great poem 5/5 =D

Lmao,
Keith I absolutely adore your sense of humor. This was hilarious. Great job on conveying the hilarity in a country boy trying to "bust a move".
Kay

Me likey lol it is funny in a way but sad in anouther way lol j/k

~!~ Cody Jo ~!~

Too damn funny Keith, I've got visions in my head now that may keep me awake at night lol :D

Wow that was really good!
Had me laughing the whole time
Great job......Dont break a hip! :D
Kidding of course lol
But that would be bad huh!

Lol omg you are sumthing I tell! how one of my quotes brings me sumone that is so real n full of life 5/5 country boy u nice...