Tommy,

How this has been overlooked I will never know. It is one of the most sincere reads I have read in a long time. It's honest and has a lot of power behind it. It tells a lot in only a few stanzas but quality definitely outweighs quantity here.

'Remain faithful to yourself and desires,
Never jeopardize, for a moment of glory,
Hard work and heart is all life requires,
We're all writers of our own life story.'
^^
This stanza is the most honest as we must always remain true to ourselves as if we don't then who else will we remind true to. Also, I love the ending we do write our own life story and our paths because I believe we do have one road mapped out for us.
Such a powerful write all around.
Em