Hm very interesting, but i still really like it.
Good job! :)

Aww dear "hugs" am sorry to hear that. i hope it didn't end like this. you both should try to talk about it again if you don't want to lose each other.

as for poem, it had deep feelings and sad ones i like it though because it has true feelings and i can imagine the pain

Sad and True? nice write xP

I thought it was very well written. and with good feeling. :)