Pain, It's hard to get through, YOu feel like no ones there and no one will ever be,
YOU think mabe tomorrow will be better, but it never is. The wish of tomorrow and it not being better only makes u never want to hope again, becasue you know it can't come true, so you give up all together, ONly more pain the fill the void of broken hopes and dreams.

nice job

[~lacie~] 5/5

Hole poem 1 paragraph make the reader scare of reading,

i hope you fix that , adn the rhyming not much organised i hope i read more good one in future

A sad one but very well written. Keep up