Beautiful:D

RAIN.. hEARD ALL LOVERS LOVE RAIN. mARVELLOUS THEME

This such a powerful piece of work. I absolutely love the way you describe you describe your emotions, likenn them to a stormy day..puddles, rain, blustering wind, even the children, like your little broken heart. Fighting with your unbrella - the frustration of broken love.

I really love this piece. It is wonderful!

I am sorry I haven't prepared a better comment for you.

My favourite stanza is the first one, but really, they are all good!!!
Another day like today
puddles are growing on the ground
sky is fuzzy and Grey and people are
running without umbrellas
It is a cold rainy morning
and I left my window open
Could anyone tell me where you went?
I am missing you here with me now..

What an amazing poem-the imagery, the feelings, I mean the way you used the children, and the mud, and mixed it in with your words...amazing! Great job.
Also: 'plan' should be 'planned' in the second stanza. Great job!

I love this one...

my favorite

I used all the energy in my little heart
^^
this was adorable,made me teary...my favourite part...wonderful poem...I love it 5/5

Take care..
Isha