Beautiful poem, wonderful job! :)

Nice.. thanks for the comment too. . i was shocked when you commented, i thought it was my husband, coz he also loves James Bond.. =D
your poem, i like it, its truthful

The rhythm's a bit muddled but the lexis is wonderful, I love the way you express yourself here xxx

Interesting Bond, Great write. Keep it up agent. and yes, sisters are also dudes best friend

Wow..I like it!!
5/5
I wondering if you would check out my poems

Really great coz it comes from ur heart ...
which is always truthful

Great write!!!
a very sensible and truthful piece of work. Really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

God bless u

I love the line 'the truth that alomost killed me or the lie that made me come alive' i might be taking that a different way than you intended but i can totally relate to that. great job

EXCELLENT PIECE OF WORK... IT WAS SHOR BUT TRUE WELLDONE

EXCELLENT PIECE OF WORK... IT WAS SHOR BUT TRUE WELLDONE

Short but so meaningful...great job

Very good write ,and a thought provoking one too.

One moment my heart stopped than just skipped a beat
Why not this funny mistake I would often repeat
Which is true? The Truth that almost killed me
Or the lie that made me come alive

A lovely poem !:)
Biya

I LIKED THE PEOM...GOOD JOB.