Comments : Fear of the Becoming

  • 16 years ago

    by mii5t3rii0u5 p03t

    That touched home for me nice work.

  • Ty

  • 16 years ago

    by Cainer

    I know how you feel. Same thing happened to me and the problem i have is that i never did get around to telling that person they meant so much to me. So don't wait! Very Nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Mask... Jim Carrey wore one and became so famous... I too wear one so all over hear........... Think so..

  • ....yeah...but i didnt mean for the title to be like that....u have read it right?

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this write a lot, it flows great from the beginning to the end and it holds an amount of emotions expressed in a really good way.

    I think that many people can relate to this poem and to the feelings that you portrayed here.

    All in all, I like your choice of words through the poem. Whole piece sounds sincere like it's written straight from the heart which makes it very touching.

    Keep up!