Lovely poem, lots of action words. I know the feeling of not being able to forgive someone who hurts you. Good write and fun to read.

A female is always know as the flower. Look at it as if you are a rose. You start off with many pedels. Then you hold the boys hand, you gave him a pedel. You then kiss, there is another pedel, then you go all the way. you just keep giving him pedels until he has the whole rose. Then he throws them away, and now you have nothing left to give the next guy you see. And you waist so much love, so much time, so many tears on that person. So all you have to do is start fresh and buy yourself a new rose.

I absolutely lovee

Boys lie to the girls,
Getting them all happy and in love,
Making them believe that you truly loved them!

this is so true. i didn't used to believe it but i do now. even i hav fallen victim to it. well done

For your poem that is =)