Comments : Khushiya

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    "Kushiya ki umar lambi nahi hoti
    Hasakar rula jati hai,
    basant ke baad patjhad de jati hai "

    ^^ really it reminds of all the times I hv cried... :) very beautiful poem.. sach likha hai aapne.... khushiya ki umar lambi nahi hoti... hasakar rula jati hai....

    keep writing...

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Bahut achhi hai

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    "Ab mein na bhagu gi tere pichhe
    Tujh ko hi ana hoga mere darwaje
    Janna hai tujh ko jaha, ja chali ja tu
    Ab mein na bhagu gi tere pichhe
    Kyoki mein janti hau

    Kushiya ki umar lambi nahi hoti
    Hasakar rula jati hai, "
    basant ke baad patjhad de jati hai"
    ........Beautiful feelings of a Loving Soul