My favourite stanza:
"teach me again,
and I'll swear this is the end,
I'll make you pay and justify,
it's my life - so get a grip!"

Nice expression of feelings of our lovely poet. :)

You sound really angry in this--and putting emotions into your writing is what makes it good, so fantastic job. It kind of seemed like you were losing the anger towards the end, so be careful not to lose your steam when you're doing so good! But a fantastic job..can't wait for more!

I love sometimes i feel the same way with my mom soo im here for u great poem...5/5

Excellent oem from an excellent HOTTTIE of a poet