Absolutely a beautiful poem.
It was stunning, and totally captured me.
The ending is sad in a way, but amazing.
5/5.

Fats reak nice poem

Yes, the ending was not what we wanted. It was too cruel :P I was really into this poem, feeling sweet, good and then...BANG...reality....OH NO!!! I think I would scream and then quickly try to get sleep again and keep on dreaming... :D

Ur poem rocks but really I am shocked bcoz of the end..but at the same time it is pretty cool..nice work..keep it up 5/5..

This is such a sweet poem and it had the potential to be truly awesome but i spose the harshness of the ending is just reality hitting. but the bulk of it is just so beautiful and th eimagery is amazing, a really really good piece! 5/5

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.ayyyyyyyyyyyyy.que lindo,i love it lol....

LOVE SOMETIMES HAPPENS IN ANOTHER WORLD BUT THE WORLD WHERE U LIVE ACTUALLY , IT DOES INT. YOU JUST CANT HELP BUT CRY WHEN U FIND OUT THAT U ARE A VICITIM OF LOVING SOMEONE U NEVER KNEW EXIST OR NOT.

YOUR POEMS IS NICE.

Yeah This was such a nice piece of writing ! I was just picturizing all what the poem says :) ..Infact , this is the poem which is when read , brings a scene at the front of reader !
Biya