I don't think I have read a piece like this, and I truly enjoyed it. So very passionate in sorrow....
Very well done,
5/5--Elly.

Alot of love put in this poem! awesome work

Oh, wow. very powerful. i hope it's ot true
5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

The two first parts were realy good
but keep reading it made me feel bored
sorry for beeing unkind in my comments

I liked it alot...Great...

This was so unique and beautifully sad. very well done!
~Kayla