Comments : Deaths son

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Shoulders bent to hide his face.
    Staring in a silent gaze.
    Tilted head a crooked smile.
    Whitened skin, your baby's child.

    I love that passage that was an awesome poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    I love that you love it! thanks! im writing some more like it now

  • 16 years ago

    by ele may

    I think you are really good at the poems you right keep writing and i'll keep reading!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacie

    Awsome! i think i will do that, ttfn!