Wow..this poem is...very beautiful!!
I like it..

What a poem?
ur words describe the feelings , the pain ,and the love
good job

Nice poem. I made me laughing and smiling.. For me this poem is funny and interested. *gives you high 5*

Love stories... I personally hate this Romeo and Juliet stuff.. One reason this love story is famous because it never get in the real life.. If they had been together for years I bet they would have been so romantic...

Lovely . XX

I just want to say that this poem is so good that it nearly brought tears out of my eyes.

Damn good poem i love it 5/5

Thanks for the comment! That poem was fantastic no joke! great emotions!

GOsh this is amazingly good
just wonderfull i love it :)

Oh, this poem brought tears to my eyes at the end. It was perfect in every sense of the word. It was a wonderful love story and it had a tragic ending (like most love stories, eh?). 5.5

I love this.
it really shows how much one person can impact on your life so much
makes you realise how much you might be doing for someone without you even knowing it.
fantastic :]

Omg this is soo good.....brought me to tears...honestly....you have a wonderful talent for writing!! i give it a 10

Wow i loved it! 10/5

This poems shows that true love does exist and that people do change for the one they love.... This poem was so beautiful and brought tears to my eyes... I know that everyone who reads your poem will have something to think about.... this was awesome! Great job! Keep up the great writing!!
----> Jazmin

Well written-Very moving and full of emotion.
Lisa