Tell u d truth it's a reall nice poem wid a meaning to it only crit is "but no one wants to see us as a couple.
they liked us as we are now, uncouple.
but i don't like it one bit,
i hate it thats all i have to admit."

take out the word "uncouple"

Wow yeah me and my ex fiance just broke up and now he is with another girl!! i really hope you didnt go through this becasue it hurts really bad!! pm me sometime