I like the first two graphs

Great poem, nice flow and simple stanzas. Well done. Greta xx

Hey.this is a gud one.The first para is really touching.Keep up thet gud work.

Really nice poem.
first 2 paras are more interesting. Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Nice poem, Mohamed...I liked it sooo much..
I think u r from Egypt?? aren't u??