Very nice poem!!!
full of hopes and desires...Keep up the good work.

God bless u

Someone..... Someday.... Somewhere... Do not bother you will get a someone special for the picture in your profile soon and this is how we will get to read still more marvellous poems like this one... Best wishes

"Sometimes, someday, somewhere." this is the perfect tittle
well am looking for him too, my poem is called "Searching for him"
I guess we're both lookin for someone
5/5 :)

I can relate to this poem.... I know the feeling... Wonderful poem...beautiful expressed words..

I wish you find her..some day...

Hassan
Beautiful yet sad. The heart never lets go of the one we love. The mind always hopes they will return.

Someday, my wait will end.
I will find her near me;
Spreading the arms,
Waiting to hold me.

I love this stanza. So much warmth in your words.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Wow this poem is soooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood really liked it.=)

Well,, it's nice poem,, the words were simple, but when you combined them, it became powerful,,, strong emotion inside.. I love the 2nd stanza.. It's a unique way to told us that you won't stop waiting for her...
It's beautifully written..
Keep up the good work..

This was short and sweet.
To the point straight throught the whole poem.
I think we all have some hope that we will find the "one" for us.
And I hope you do.
Flawless =)
5/5

Wow! the "sometimes, someday, somewhere" thing is so captivating and this idea is developed so great.
though rhythm is not very clear, i believe this poem can be read out only with a tender intonation and it'd kinda make the rhythm better
my fav lines are:
The light of my love,
Will slash the dark ways.

because, though the "light of love" idea isn't not so unique, you made it fit the poem so much and it really expressed the general emotion.

and as for you poem, i would say it's full of "light of love" or "light of hope"

5/5

English must not be your native language, maybe you're still learning it as you go along, at least it seems that way with this poem.

The first two lines of stanza one and the second two lines of the same stanza do not flow well, you have long sounding words Some/Time Think/ing and then short words light love slash dark the. I perfer if you had kept the writing to the final two lines, the way they were written. It was more poetic and beautiful while the first two were cliche when it came to love poems.

I think you should have added more description in your second verse, it was beautiful, but imagine this in your mind or your heart, how would it feel emotionally to feel this person in your arms.

The alst stanza was a typical love poem, but it's not entirely flat, you could improve lots, find your strengths such as the last two lines of stanza one, and avoid reading love poems, write on your feelings.

Okay nice job
for me the first stanza didn't flow that well
maybe switch up some words or something
a helpful way to know if the flow is on
is to do a syllabol count
if all syllabols are around the same number
then you've got yourself a nice flow
The poem could have used some descriptions
or emotions maybe?
When you write you want to become
deep within yourself and truly
drag everything you've got out of the experience
the last stanza was a bit cliche by throwing new
words in there then you might add a little spice to the poem itself
The title for this poem though was cool
i've done the same thing before
nice job
4/5

Your wording are relates with desires and Hope.... Welldone... 5/5

Nice expresion,the more i read your poems,the more i like :)

I really like this poem. Beautifully written.

5/5

Wooow! I guess that most of us can relate to this one. The longing and waiting for that one true love that never seems to come, but we are all sure that someday we will find him/her!! Awsone job!