Comments : Perfectly Flawed

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Loved it, very powerful emotion and great word choice. The flow was excellent and I loved the repitition of your title in the poem, added just the right amount to it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    That was really good
    so sweet and the rhyming was really good
    good job =) 5/5