Marvellous job

The words you used in this poem makes your poem very powerful! Like i felt like i was really getting into it! but yeah the tone of the poem is strong good job no negs! :) 5/5

Wow. This was simply brilliant. I'd like to hear the origin of this particular piece. This was a very professional sounding poem. Good job purple. You have my respect and now I'm one of your fans.