Amazing.

Told u you are a great poet baby <3 i love you!

W/w mike and thAnks savannah

This is absolutely amazing.
I loved it.
this was so dark and beautiful.
Great job hun

Thanks soo much <3

[~lacie~]

Loved it lacie

This poem gave me chills. You did an amazing job Lacie. :)

I really liked this.
The one thing that put me off a little bit was when you used Ur. I'm not a big fan of abriviations (Spelling?) like that.
Other than that, I thought it was good and I got through it without being destracted.

**Brii.

Wow that was amazing, i loved it.. :D

Great

Love the poem. very well written u got some talent.

Lacie your poem enspires me. it has such an emotional impact and veiw that any one who read this would love it. and the only way i can sum up my approval of this very well written poem is "wow your good" :)

Nice poem good props

Legit :)

My god, this is amazing. The description is wow... I cant even describe it. I could hear somebody sitting there saying this. I saw a teen looking at me with sincere eyes but pain elsewhere coaxing me to take the gun and run. I felt it all. It was a fabulous read and it really showed me a side of creativity most people do not usually see. The word choice fit perfectly. The style was stunning and the concept was just amazing.Thank you so much for writing such a piece.

5/5 One of the best I have found in a LONG time.

~MRK

Really nice,

I love the description, very dark and sinister. ;)

This poem is awesomely right and very dark i love it

This poem is awesomely right and very dark i love it

Wow thanks everyone, stunning response!