Comments : Would you play my game of death?

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah

    Amazing.

  • 15 years ago

    by mike

    Told u you are a great poet baby <3 i love you!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lacie

    W/w mike and thAnks savannah

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This is absolutely amazing.
    I loved it.
    this was so dark and beautiful.
    Great job hun

  • 15 years ago

    by Lacie

    Thanks soo much <3

    [~lacie~]

  • 12 years ago

    by theresa mitchell

    Loved it lacie

  • 12 years ago

    by Nathan Bosworth

    This poem gave me chills. You did an amazing job Lacie. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    I really liked this.
    The one thing that put me off a little bit was when you used Ur. I'm not a big fan of abriviations (Spelling?) like that.
    Other than that, I thought it was good and I got through it without being destracted.

    **Brii.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow that was amazing, i loved it.. :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Pain

    Great

  • 12 years ago

    by ash

    Love the poem. very well written u got some talent.

  • 12 years ago

    by mikaylar

    Lacie your poem enspires me. it has such an emotional impact and veiw that any one who read this would love it. and the only way i can sum up my approval of this very well written poem is "wow your good" :)

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Nice poem good props

  • 12 years ago

    by Xavier

    Legit :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My god, this is amazing. The description is wow... I cant even describe it. I could hear somebody sitting there saying this. I saw a teen looking at me with sincere eyes but pain elsewhere coaxing me to take the gun and run. I felt it all. It was a fabulous read and it really showed me a side of creativity most people do not usually see. The word choice fit perfectly. The style was stunning and the concept was just amazing.Thank you so much for writing such a piece.

    5/5 One of the best I have found in a LONG time.

    ~MRK

  • 12 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Really nice,

  • 11 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    I love the description, very dark and sinister. ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by brandonxx

    This poem is awesomely right and very dark i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by brandonxx

    This poem is awesomely right and very dark i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Lacie

    Wow thanks everyone, stunning response!