Holy cow. just like....wow.

These are my words
This is my art
Black carnival ghosts
Still break my heart

^ idk why. my fave stanza in an amazing piece...

the flow in this was like...spotless. it was bouncy, because of its shortness. so it's almost...mocking. the rhythm makes it happy, the words, which are what really matter...make it sad.
wonderful job, me tomato.

Wow very sad poem : /
"I'll give you a riddle
As the clock gives you time
I'll give you a poem
If you give me a reason to rhyme"
that was my favorite stanza you are a really good writer
i nominated your poem for the poetry contest! good luck! 5/5 great job hunn <33

~So many tears
Can't see the clowns grin
Black carnival games
That nobody can win~

that just describes the dark side of love so perfectly. it looks so beautiful and fun from far away but wen u finally experiece it....it's a whole other story. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~