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  • 15 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Wow, deep and dark poem. I could see it happening before my eyes! Great imagery. Nicely written.
    Take care, Greta xx

  • 15 years ago

    by RedDeadShore

    Yeah i like this, i agree with the comments above, very well written, i get a good picture in my mind of wat ur saying, keep it up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Really Great Poem !

    5*