Comments : Justification! Why?

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    You have put it perfectly... Awsume... Simply awsume one can say... From 007

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is a very good, angry and amazing poem. So much feeling...and...just amazing! Very good! You are getting very good at expressing feelings! The only thing I have to say is this:

    'You have no need to grumble
    Please try to become humble'

    these lines kind of worry me, I see that you wanted it to rhyme--but take care not to do it at the expense of a poem. As of now, I have no idea on what you can do to fix it, other than take it out, but if I have an idea I'll contact you.
    Very good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply marvelous description.... Truly love the style! 5/5