Natalie, I am literally blown away with this poem...
I am in love with a poet.
His mind so intricate, indefinable.
Unique is an understatement.
I am a prisoner of his words.
Introducing the poems message with a compliment to the poets thought process. To be held captive by words is such a beautifully powerful concept.
Enslaved by every syllable,
I wish to petrify these inscriptions,
More valuable than diamonds, rubies.
There is no escape for my heart.
Breaking down each word into syllables to truely express how poerful these words are - amazing.
I can almost imagine you reading the poets work slowly so as not to overwhelm your senses!
Creating an everlasting monument to poetic art - words in stone, a throne of stone!!
The value of words? How can one place a value on such intense words? Words such as these can make you fly, or alternatively make you die. There is no monetry value that can match this!
Entrapment, quite possilbly??
He lyrically caresses my soul,
Thus creating entirety in me.
For his eyes only, I will...
Remove this facade.
Shedding all barriers and thus exposing your soul to his poetic will. A wonderful Stanza!!
Observe me, my beloved artist,
For I am naked, standing before you.
With you, I cannot hide my fears,
You know me poet. You feel me.
Creating an unstanding of being understood inside and out! A wonderfully submissive notion.
Painting expressions and pains,
You have invaded me.
Deciphered my mind completely,
I now belong to you.
You have decribed vividly being penitrated with a mind of words. I can almost see the words unraveling your encrypted barriers and embracing your being.
You overpower my senses,
Enchant my very essence,
Chanting your verbal voodoo,
Who am I to resist?
Sucumbing to a mysterious black magic. One that you are no longer strong enough to resist! I can feel the powerful soul control. Addictive as narcotcs.
His mind illustrates worlds unknown,
Sensations not even dreamt of,
Passions, inconceivable by lay men!
He is my poet, I am his victim.
You have dramatically elevated this poet, promoted to a kind of demi-god!!
Words, the poets power to harness any and all who trust in him. The poets words pierce the heart that still warmly pumps. Should his words be removed, the blood would escape. (R.I.P)
A discription of a victim, well and truely shackled by poetic words!!
I have peeked into a poet's mind,
The inexplicable fusion of dark and pure,
But I am only the poet's lover,
Shadowing his divine brilliance, loving it.
To decipher a brilliant mind, to understand its darkest recesses is the opitome of intamacy!
I loved this write. It created such a intense imagry of the mysterious poets mind. You know the poet better than he knows himself!!