My heart just bottomed out. thanks...

Raindrops on grey roses
From tears in her eyes

Hearts made from glass
Windows made from bricks
Words here hurt more
A lot more than stones and sticks

^ definitely my fave...hmm...can u say treasure hunt?

jesse. it's amazing. the world isn't as pretty when it's grey..it's amazing when it gets thrown into technicolor..

As this fire burns
It gets out of control
How long has this heart been broken?
Was it ever whole?
-awsum!
jessie you did great!!

Grey........ As it goes..... Poem is graciouslly greyallous.... I mean to say marvellous.....

Words hurt more than any wounds..... A great point

...... With Best wishes 007

Mwahaha. i'm gonna talk to you one way or another...jesse....still a wonderful poem. really. and i miss u....so much. so bleh on you. come back...

still gets a 5/5

Wow, i luv it! the flow is a little off sometimes but the over all meaning and choice of words was beautiful. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~