Wow...i really liked this! lol. it was great. the flow was superb, dark, chilling..

The Raven left with doubt and fear.
Now I scream loud, but none can hear.

^ this made me think of a lot of the things i write...screaming silently..no one to hear...definitely relatable.

great job!
5/5

Good job
keep up the good work!

You held my attention from the beginning to the end of this amazing piece with so fantastically vivid images that you portrayed within every line. I like the whole atmosphere of this piece- so hauntingly dark and intense yet overwhelmingly captivating. I like your choice of words in the whole poem, too along with excellent rhymes and flow. I think that you really have the way with words and your talent simply shines through your dark poetry.
Greatly done!

Creepy in a good way. Makes you think what you would do if you killed someone or something.

It's wicked feet perched it upon the tomb's back.
It's crow was filled with the anger and pain of the dead.

shouldn't the IT'S be ITS instead
srry kinda of a perfectist when it comes to
that stuff.

I couldn't face him when I stilled his heart beat.
Shooting him from afar too no skill or feat.
Cowardice had filled my mind.
The anger I felt left me blind.

I absoultey love the wording right here^

>SheDevil

I really like this. Your dark poems are a lot more different then others I've read they really don't have a poetic side like yours do. For me in this one the flow was a bit shaky but it was still a really good poem.
5/5

Wow. This one impressed me. Every line rhymed.. monorhyme? I think that's what it's called. But, wow. Impressive =) 5/5 Nice work!