I let it eat the world away,
Didn't care to look,
Until one day I came to see,
It was you it took.

This is my favorite stanza. The whole piece flows nicely and I especially like the ending, it felt very strong to me. I think a lot of people can relate to the message it brings and the path that took it there. Great work.

I liked every stanza of this poem. Very very well written!

Very heartfelt ... beautiful write

"A journey deep inside my soul,
To find a sense of peace,
Demons burned inside the flames,
Of heavens sweet release. "

i appreciate your choice of words and the way you have expressed your emotions...

good work...

Very good, I liked it! Good word choice and emotions. 5/5