Oh, this almost made me cry, again i think it's awsome, the relationship you have with your mom, this poem is incredibly sweet

Very rythmic i loved it
thanks for the comment and keep up the amazing work :)

This is a beautiful poem it reminds me of my mom*wipe tears away* very well penned

Thanks for your comment on my poem "She talks in her sleep" could u also comment on "Silent Chaos" when u get a chance thanks you again for your comment.

I loved this poem, it touched my heart, i know i dont comment but i hardly get a chance to come on, so i just paste ym poems in and go off. lifes busy. but it reminds me of my mum and how i feel for her, with whats happenign in our lifes. xx

Oh my.......
this was fantastic. the flow was so soothe and none of it seemed forced. i loved it! it reminded me of what mine and my mums relations ship was like. fantastic poem, well done

This is a really touching poem, but slightly sad at the same time. Still, well written and softly expressed 5/5