WOW ... this poem was great. I loved the structure and flow. The rhyming was also excellent and right on key.

Honestly, this poem just rolled off the tongue with no pressure or force what so ever and that is a great thing.

I love how you were able to use such simplicity in a large vocabulary. That real made this poem simple yet beautiful.

Good Job

~~Sher

I totally agree with sherry lynn i loved this poem it was very well written =]

Excellent job you are a good writter
5/5!
=]

Thoughts are scattered,
Reps are broken,
Hurtful words,
Best left unspoken.
^^^
You hit the nail on the head in this part. The pain and heartache rumors cause others leave scars on their hearts forever.

Love yourself,
To love another,
Give as though,
Each were your brother.
^^^
Excellent message told in this part.

The entire piece flowed wonderful and leaves the reader thinking deeply. The message within the lines is one everyone should listen too

Excellent read, penned with perfection
Luanne