Wow...that's intense..I like it.

Mmmm... starts out sad, full of pain. But the last line surprise it. It was a total twist to the ending. I really liked it. You are an amazing author, hunni. And Rikku totally loves you bunches! Hope to see you on here more.. miss ya a lot. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~