I can realate to your poem!! my parents where the same all of the attention goes to my brother i was hardly even noticed! i love the flow and feelings in this poem. keep writing your really good

This is more of a powerful piece and most people would say they could relate to it in a lot of ways. Get the readers attention in the first few lines and they'll stay the whole way. I don't think you should ever have to fight for your parents love or attention but its amazing how often it happens. Great start and a strong finish this earned a 5/5 great job