I loved it personally.
very emotional.
it is so easy to fall into the addiction of putting on a facade everyday.
keep it up!

Thanks....like i said it wasn't one of my better poems...

I feel well the same
i can be crying in the middle of the hall while every one is passing by and no one even notices
i guess its because i was not really crying i was laughing
but he had walked by and i had to fake a smile but really i wish i would of started crying hard and uncontrolable so that maybe he would acually turn around and look at me
instead of walking away

It's nice,,, just didn't flow well.. It has a strong emotion, especially the few last stanzas... I'm sure it's because you wrote it when you were depressed..
Take it easy, gurl..

Thanks guys...i'm gonna work on it and repost it when i get a chance

Hmm very interesting.
I like it but Im not sure about the very last line. It jsut sounds like youre trying to force it or something.
Overall I really like it :) I fel the same way alot of times

Wow i really like how it was written.