This was great! I really like this poem, it really has emotion in the words.
5/5

I like your choice of words through the whole piece a lot, you worded the whole poem greatly. The flow is excellent, your rhymes are refreshing and captivating from the beginning to the end.

I can relate to this piece in a way and probably many people can, which made it even more powerful, but despite the cliche topic you managed to write truly memorable, fantastic poem.

My favorite stanza is:

- Symbolic of the days that I'd spent amiss,
Secluded and solitary, this darkness is real.
Who should think that such pain exists,
So desperately alone, unable to feel.-
^^^
This stanza seems flawless to me. The rhythm, wording, overwhelming emotions- greatly written.

5/5 from me