This piece was well written and it flowed together harmoniously and the rhyme was brilliant 5/5 keep writing!!

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

This poem is cliche, the meaning has been done a thousand times before and YET you've seemed to make it VERY individual. The flow was great, and wording just right!

Again the meaning, although done time and time again before, is very special, never forgetting the ones we've lost is the greatest gift we can give them.

I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.