Wow i did not know that you can write and express your self like that.

You used such very provoking words, very thoughtful as well. Your choice of words were really awe-inspiring, I loved it!

Keep writing!
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Best wishes,

Sarah

I love the way you repeated the beginning word for 2 lines each. Though not a fan of repetition ... I really liked how this one was displayed. Very creative expression!

Dark clouds are drawing close,
Dark and dreadful they are...
^^^
Loved this ending ....

Very heart touching piece you've penned here
Well done
Luanne

Nice choice of words
well done

WOW. I am impressed. Well-written. Keep it coming up..

I realli like it. ur slight repititon is great.
xx