Comments : My Stitched-Up Wings.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel

    I rather like it, other than the grammar. But I wouldn't fret too much about that, as I am a complete nerd in that respect (and several others).

    I think that the poem has flow, which is important, and the fact that you ended well and didn't get caught up in the current makes me value you as a writer. You certainly have my vote. :)