Very strong emotion but this is more like a letter or a conversation(prose) not really poerty at all.

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Aww!..this was so sad!!..i loved it!!..the rating shuld've been higher!!!!!..i loved it really emotional!!!!!!...great job hun!
Aly

Sad but beautiful poem..

"Suddenly best friends become worst enemies
And the people you run to...
Are all aganist you
Trust can be as fragile as the petals of a red rose"
^^ very touching... it happens sometimes when you feel as if the whole world is against you.. but this feeling slowly fades away...
I could really relate to these lines..

"When friends break my trust"
The sound of my laughter
Hides the sadness in my eyes
As I step out of bed"
^^i loved these lines...

good work..