Comments : You

  • 19 years ago

    by Mercedes

    i completely understand...boys will have you on an emotional rollercoaster but follow your heart just make sure you dont become completely vulnerable...because at any given chance, a boy will break your heart thanx for the support

  • 19 years ago

    by peaches

    damn gurl that poem was hella deep and i liked it yea boyz can do that to you and i can feel wut ur sayin keep up tha good work luv ya jenny

  • 19 years ago

    by East Poetry

    you have a good head on your shoulders. you know exactely what you want, and are very good at puting into words. my fav part of this poem was

    If I fell for you, would you catch me?
    Or would you watch me fall
    Without even telling me
    How you really felt at all?

    keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by jane

    Wow...thats all i can say....i loved it....5/5......= )