Short but so strong, describes the battle many face very well

Good job, well written. its kinf of inpirational

Very strong poem, yet so sad. i love it!

Loved the poem

the word "strive" adds a powerful meaning to the poem

I Strive,
to make my Destiny..
I Strive,
to stand on my own..
^ Great

Poem short and good great job 4/5