Nicely done Keith.

5/5

Awww you poor auld lad, lol, good poem 5/5

I loved it....hey you could always call it a mid life crisis lol or the male menopause lol.Mind you had me a little worried cos i am sure i am showing some the things you wrote of too lol.

Aha I really enjoyed this poem especially the last 2 verses! well done!

Great poem-watch the misspelled words-it detracts from the meaning, at least for a teacher.

I think I may have to raise an '05 Shiraz to this one later!

Ha ha ha! Love it. You described me absolutely, (and a few others I'm sure). 5/5

Such a lovely poem.. I loved it ! The way you expressed how you feel, which is feeling thankful about what you have...It's just great ! And you somehow made it sound funny...! I totally admire it 5/5