I loved it

Luanne,

I find so much comfort in your poems:)

Thanks, sweet friend!

Much love,

Ingrid

So far out of all poems i have read i really love urs. alot of meaning u put in it. and alot of it is so true.

Luanne
Once again you have written an excellent poem. The imagery and flow are awesome.

Is there a magic button to press
for memories I wish to delete
or an injection for happiness
to once again feel complete

I love this stanza. It would be great if there was a cure for a broken heart. The feelings you have portrayed in the first part of your poem of bing a teen are great.

Closure came through time and tears
realizing we were never meant to be
I loved and lost, yet will love again
And perhaps this loss was meant to be

Now looking back as a woman now. Seeing things in a different light. After being through the pain of life. We try to make sense of things we have been through... But do we ever forget the first love that found their way into our hearts?

Excellent!
Love Cindy

I want to say great work

Nice work and I have to say I'm still not sure I have found the answer to this age old question.I liked your write and the words you chose to express it, I think the flow was nice too. look forward to more...

That's true, there is nothing you can do than to accept it and go on with your life. Great poem!

I loved it. I used to ask my self questions like this too, and I still do sometimes because I really wish that there was a button to puch to erase memories because I would have ti down long ago now. Still loved the poem though.

*This feeling overwhelms me
an answer I really need to know
is there a cure for a broken heart
or is it chronic cause of woe*

the broken heart can heal also. but it need to take more time, months and some is year. it also depend on a person on hpw he/she can handle it...

*This feeling overwhelms me
an answer I really need to know
is there a cure for a broken heart
or is it chronic cause of woe*

the broken heart can heal also. but it need to take more time, months and some is year. it also depend on a person on hpw he/she can handle it...

*Is there a special pill to take
that will lessen this aching pain
or will this heart forever drown
in this endless stream of rain
*

they has no pill, but if you want to easy heal for taht. go to a place were you can meditate, and don't blame your self in such happen like these even if you feel that is your fault. if you know how to forgive other mistakes and forget what thwy did. learn how to forgive your self as well so taht the wounds or scar that you have had it will easily be heald.

*Is there a magic button to press
for memories I wish to delete
or an injection for happiness
to once again feel complete*

haha magic botton to delete the sadness memorise and the rest... sad to say we don't have that. but if you want to forget all about this. keep not to think it always, or make your self busy.

*Finding an answer to the question
took me many, many years
but I think I've finally found it
after spilling plenty of tears*

ow, really it that so. i hope you find the answer. cos the answer was is only to you. or other words its your desition

*Finding an answer to the question
took me many, many years
but I think I've finally found it
after spilling plenty of tears*

ow, really it that so. i hope you find the answer. cos the answer was is only to you. or other words its your desition

All i can say. learn to forgive yourself and accept the facts

5/5

Wow this poem is good=)

_wow! this is really cute.. i love the 1st stanza down to the last.... awesome!

WOW! I really enjoyed this poem. It had great flow and the emotion really struck me. It was very strong and fun to read.

Is there a magic button to press
for memories I wish to delete
or an injection for happiness
to once again feel complete

^^this was my favorite stanza. I really liked it. It described alot of what I'm feeling now. Once again wonderful job. Please keep writing. 5/5
~Forever Broken~