I really like it. from beginning to end. but this is my favorite part

I surrender my Soul
As I walk through the Doors
I find love is a poisonous Gas

cause it has a lot of meaning. that love made u dye inside slowly n slowly n yeah. i really like. nicely done!!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

:3
oh wow. i absolutely loved this; i know the other person that commented this said something about the last part but these lines:
I surrender my Soul
As I walk through the Doors
I find love is a poisonous Gas

jeez. I love that last line. Really, it could be intoxicating right? i think this really shows some emotion. great job.
5/5.

=] i enjoyed it very much<33

--**skye~

I like it.
Its really good
5/5 =)