A story full of charecter. You could write this in a famous poet's book; no-one would know the difference.

Would be better if you put all the words in a common order..
Story..as you say it's good
All of we, think that we have one to tell
Yours is not exception
But it takes a little bit more to become a poem
Keep up!
Inspier in her..and something beautiful could come out
good luck

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