Aww.. babe! that is really sweet.
i like it a lot.. but i think i would change one thing

You are always near me
Like a shadow in the dark
Thank God your friendships free
And when we talk there's just that...spark
((the last line))

it didnt flow to well..
maybe change it to
Even we we talk i can feel the spark

i dunno! haha you're 10x better than me at this.

but i think that even if you didn't change it,
that should would love it just for the message.
so sweet and written from the heart!
keep it up babe! i love it! and you!!!

Waw its great poem
you write it in simple way easy to see and feel what you feel,i like how you make it flow and the imagination of your mind,
my favorait stanze is:You are always near me
Like a shadow in the dark
Thank God your friendships free
Even when we speak, I can feel a spark
well done 5/5