Awe!

Thats so cool and this has either happened to you, or you've watched it before!!!
cause you got the detail down packed!!!

Great job

5/5

A nice write with a good story line, though the rhythm/metre is off in spots too many syllables/words. Some of the rhymes are a bit off ie. stanzas 2,3,&4. I did enjoy the read. As always an opinion.